Posted: “Team Spirit”

A story of turning a hockey player into the team cumdump

This was originally a way shorter fic for my Rainbow Fics 2025 set. But as I wrote, I just couldn’t tell Adam’s descent into becoming his team’s cumdump in under 1000 words. So I gave up and made it into its own thing.

And I’m glad I did! Once I let myself write what I wanted, this whole things came together in just a few days. Which isn’t even as long as it took Adam to learn to take his teammates’ cocks. 😉

When this story was going to just be 1000 words, I made a plan to divide up the week Danny had with Adam. I had to be strategic to tell the whole story so succinctly. Obviously that didn’t work.

But the outline was so immensely helpful! When writing a piecemeal story–like Adam learning to be more obedient, say ‘yes sir,’ suck a dick, and then take a dick in his ass–I was worried about never getting done. It’s happened before, and one of the reasons I let Power of Suggestion go unfinished. I just didn’t want to get bogged down.

One of my favorite gay stories I used to read was about a guy being pressured, bullied, and brainwashed into being his roommates’ bitch. The author wrote a compelling narrative of how he slowly did more and more, while also somehow justifying it to himself that he wasn’t actually becoming a cumdump. I loved reading those parts specifically, because the roommates were getting into this guy’s head! It was really hot.

So I was inspired by that. I wanted Adam to feel like his becoming his teammates’ bitch was justified or perhaps the lesser of two evils. For Adam, getting kicked off the hockey team was the worse outcome; he’d suck a dick if it meant he could stay.

After I wrote it all, I proofread it a couple times in the following days and published it on AO3. Enjoy!